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SPREAD LOVE (three haiku) spread love come on! try! be you like some growing tree branching to the sky no expectation no! love is a child of mind no condemnation love not just giving oh no! to receive as well you must be willing

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Date: 11/2/2010 9:13:00 PM
oh, I give up. My shoulder hurts and I can't keep hunting down poems of yours I 've not read. hahaha. I just know there has to be some. Hmmm, I need a better system!!!!
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Date: 4/20/2010 6:28:00 AM
believe it or not I love this haiku, i like the expression on the ending haiku give to recieve...oh no!!! p.d.
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Date: 3/14/2010 1:16:00 PM
Profound words.....said simply, beautifully, and with grace....I love this haiku x 3! Well done, Daver! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/13/2010 10:11:00 PM
U R A hit with me. I just got to hand it to u. How can we expect love, if we are not giving it out..IRMA
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Date: 3/9/2010 12:08:00 PM
gosh Daver, this is beautiful. miss you tons - hope life is being so good to you! so sweet of you to stop by and offers congrats on my feature this week. thank you sweet friend. love & hugs, shar xoxoxo
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Date: 3/8/2010 5:14:00 PM
Love your view Daver. In total agreement. Awesome Haikus.The scientist can see the Holy DNA Daver, the Higgs Bisons, some of them call them the " God particles."Little do they know these are the physical evidence of God's Spirit.Smile. Check them out. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/8/2010 6:19:00 AM
Brilliant Haikus Daver and all about my favorite subject ..LUV... and u are never too young or old to experience that magical magnificent feeling as your lines clearly show... thankxxx for commenting on my poetry today.. I just posted a new blog regarding my son calling me from Iraq if u care to comment it would be greatly appreciated... thankxxx..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/6/2010 6:00:00 PM
Awesome Daver! I discuss this often with friends -- that is your third verse... how in the heck can love happen without receiving as well? At times it takes more love to receive than to give ... have to break down the ole pride. ...but I'm workin on it .... somebody wants to buy me a beer ... I Accept! now ain't that love?! :) Seriously I think this is an awesome poem from you Daver. Into my favs. Thanks. Your friend Robert
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Date: 3/4/2010 4:56:00 PM
What an uplifting view. If everyone spread more love what a wonderful place this would be. Nice message. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen
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Date: 3/4/2010 12:55:00 PM
It spreads itself like a tree's branches. This triple haiku of love. Hey, I got your package today. I think I will like it just fine, and now, if I can just make the time to read it. There are three chapbooks now waiting for me to read! Please don't feel bad if I don't get to it before Xmas, but I promise you, eventually I will peruse it, Daver. It looks like it will be very enjoyable. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/4/2010 4:09:00 AM
spread love..yes..if only we all could..what a beauty this world would be....Charma
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Date: 3/4/2010 4:04:00 AM
I am so happy your poetry is among the poetry I am reading this morning Daver. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:02:00 PM
Ok! It's a deal! Daver and I try now. How could I not after receiving such nice comments on my poem today. So, You spread your love, I received it, I'm sure you had no expectation, but you got my gratitude and in so doing I spread love and Yes, I have no expectation. I feel like a child. I am giving and I am receiving. :) How am I doing? Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/3/2010 12:41:00 PM
This poem gives the reader the inspiration to try and "spread love." What more could you hope to achieve? A joyous, uplifting poem, Daver! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:42:00 AM
Be nice if we could spread it like peanutbutter so it would stick. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:23:00 AM
so willing! it must be spread! such a fun haiku :D
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