Spouse Minichu

A darling, a sweetheart
We agree to disagree and become carefree
Cupid's dart!

In sorrows, joys
We share all, over a coffee
Our poise!!

Tranquil
Life glows in glee
Fill!!!

A darling, a sweetheart
We share all, over a coffee
Fill!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 9, 2026 at 6:37 AM
A beautifully compact, affectionate poem. The repeating lines create a gentle circular structure, while the short bursts—“Cupid’s dart!”, “Our poise!!”, and “Fill!!!”—give it lively, heartfelt emphasis. Its coffee-sharing image makes the portrait of companionship feel especially warm and everyday-real.❤️
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September 9, 2026 at 7:26 AM
Alison, thanks for your visit and happy that you enjoyed the imagery of companionship of partners. Yes, sitting relaxed over coffee clears out so many day to day issues. Listening to each other & alive to each other's concerns is the key. Thanks again. Best. Mohan.😊 Note: the format is Minichu, one devised by me & have been successfully conducting contests & receiving good response. You may like to try the current contest on Autumn colours by me in this format.
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