Spotting Desire

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Spotting desire, in as an urge Mirroring aversion Manifesting energy surge Karma retribution Reborn time and again Heart carrying lust stain Ego borne bondage chain Raging fire Spotting desire 29-September-2021 Quietus

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/8/2021 10:13:00 AM

Another idea rich poem. One particular line challenges assumptions about self: "Ego borne bondage chain." Congratulations on a fine write. Brian

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/8/2021 10:09:00 PM

Thank you, Brian!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2021 4:24:00 AM

Creative lines you have penned in this one. Interesting one to read this morning. Sara

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/30/2021 4:33:00 AM

Thank you Sara! Basic Buddhism - negate desire & aversion