Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Spotting Desire

Spotting desire, in as an urge
Mirroring aversion
Manifesting energy surge
Karma retribution 

Reborn time and again
Heart carrying lust stain
Ego borne bondage chain

Raging fire
Spotting desire

29-September-2021
Quietus 

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Brian Sambourne October 8, 2021 at 10:13 AM Another idea rich poem. One particular line challenges assumptions about self: "Ego borne bondage chain." Congratulations on a fine write. Brian Unseeking Seeker October 8, 2021 at 10:09 PM Thank you, Brian!

Sara Kendrick September 30, 2021 at 4:24 AM Creative lines you have penned in this one. Interesting one to read this morning. Sara Unseeking Seeker September 30, 2021 at 4:33 AM Thank you Sara! Basic Buddhism - negate desire & aversion