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Spoonful of Sugar

even ugly poetry can seem tasteful ~ when penned elegantly

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/11/2022 2:59:00 PM

Sure can, sweetie…

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/11/2022 3:32:00 PM

Bittersweet all at once Kim ;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/10/2022 4:06:00 PM

Lol…I can think of a few I had difficulty commenting on, but English as a second language poets always get a break in my book. Love the humor in this monoku David. Blessings xxoo

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/11/2022 1:44:00 AM

Indeed probably a few of mine Connie, I tend to put them out warts n all, but hopefully package them up well, sometimes! cheers David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2022 2:28:00 PM

Good one. Enjoyed reading your thoughts. Sara

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/10/2022 3:40:00 PM

Thank you Sara, even if falling over try do it with style, I hope we don’t, but you know what I mean lol, cheers David

Terry Flood

Date: 7/10/2022 12:25:00 PM

Are you trying to tell us something, David? ;-) Terry

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/10/2022 12:55:00 PM

Your far too suspicious Terry, of course I am lol, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/10/2022 10:16:00 AM

Lol, it's all about the presentation and what's pleasing to the eye. I'm a sweeteners man, sugar wasn't agreeing with my waistline. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/10/2022 11:10:00 AM

The raw stuff is definitely not recommended, but It sure looks good as you say when well presented, a bit like poetry in general, cheers David

Gary Radice

Date: 7/10/2022 8:09:00 AM

Written down in the most delightful way David. Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/10/2022 9:35:00 AM

Hey! I see what you done here Gary lol, very clever indeed, cheers David

Deb M

Date: 7/10/2022 7:35:00 AM

Indeed it can David! Well said…..Debx

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/10/2022 9:32:00 AM

Heya Deb, thank goodness you agree, because my poems can get pretty damn ugly at times lol, cheers David