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Spoonful of Sugar 

even ugly poetry can seem tasteful ~ when penned elegantly

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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2022 2:59:00 PM
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Sure can, sweetie…
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/11/2022 3:32:00 PM
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Bittersweet all at once Kim ;)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/10/2022 4:06:00 PM
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Lol…I can think of a few I had difficulty commenting on, but English as a second language poets always get a break in my book. Love the humor in this monoku David. Blessings xxoo
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/11/2022 1:44:00 AM
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Indeed probably a few of mine Connie, I tend to put them out warts n all, but hopefully package them up well, sometimes! cheers David
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2022 2:28:00 PM
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Good one. Enjoyed reading your thoughts. Sara
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/10/2022 3:40:00 PM
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Thank you Sara, even if falling over try do it with style, I hope we don’t, but you know what I mean lol, cheers David
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/10/2022 12:25:00 PM
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Are you trying to tell us something, David? ;-) Terry
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/10/2022 12:55:00 PM
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Your far too suspicious Terry, of course I am lol, cheers David
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/10/2022 10:16:00 AM
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Lol, it's all about the presentation and what's pleasing to the eye. I'm a sweeteners man, sugar wasn't agreeing with my waistline. Tom
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/10/2022 11:10:00 AM
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The raw stuff is definitely not recommended, but It sure looks good as you say when well presented, a bit like poetry in general, cheers David
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Gary Radice
Date: 7/10/2022 8:09:00 AM
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Written down in the most delightful way David. Cheers - Gary
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/10/2022 9:35:00 AM
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Hey! I see what you done here Gary lol, very clever indeed, cheers David
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Deb M
Date: 7/10/2022 7:35:00 AM
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Indeed it can David! Well said…..Debx
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/10/2022 9:32:00 AM
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Heya Deb, thank goodness you agree, because my poems can get pretty damn ugly at times lol, cheers David
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