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Spoonful of Sugar

even ugly poetry can seem tasteful ~ when penned elegantly

Copyright © David Kavanagh | Year Posted 2022

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July 11, 2022 at 2:59 PM

Sure can, sweetie…

July 11, 2022 at 3:32 PM

Bittersweet all at once Kim ;)

Connie Marcum Wong

July 10, 2022 at 4:06 PM

Lol…I can think of a few I had difficulty commenting on, but English as a second language poets always get a break in my book. Love the humor in this monoku David. Blessings xxoo

July 11, 2022 at 1:44 AM

Indeed probably a few of mine Connie, I tend to put them out warts n all, but hopefully package them up well, sometimes! cheers David

July 10, 2022 at 2:28 PM

Good one. Enjoyed reading your thoughts. Sara

July 10, 2022 at 3:40 PM

Thank you Sara, even if falling over try do it with style, I hope we don’t, but you know what I mean lol, cheers David

July 10, 2022 at 12:25 PM

Are you trying to tell us something, David? ;-) Terry

July 10, 2022 at 12:55 PM

Your far too suspicious Terry, of course I am lol, cheers David

July 10, 2022 at 10:16 AM

Lol, it's all about the presentation and what's pleasing to the eye. I'm a sweeteners man, sugar wasn't agreeing with my waistline. Tom

July 10, 2022 at 11:10 AM

The raw stuff is definitely not recommended, but It sure looks good as you say when well presented, a bit like poetry in general, cheers David

July 10, 2022 at 8:09 AM

Written down in the most delightful way David. Cheers - Gary

July 10, 2022 at 9:35 AM

Hey! I see what you done here Gary lol, very clever indeed, cheers David

July 10, 2022 at 7:35 AM

Indeed it can David! Well said…..Debx

July 10, 2022 at 9:32 AM

Heya Deb, thank goodness you agree, because my poems can get pretty damn ugly at times lol, cheers David

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