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Spooky: Lady of the House Pantoum

In the dark and shaded glen amid foreboding trees in the place where a house had been there never comes a breeze Amid foreboding trees blood cries out from the earth there never comes a breeze she weeps for all she's worth Blood cries out from the earth where she became his wife she weeps for all she's worth for there she took his life Where she became his wife she suffered but overcame for there she took his life but she was not to blame She suffered but overcame the lady of the house waits still but she was not to blame it was against her will The lady of the house waits still haunting hearth amid the rubble it was against her will the beginning of her trouble Haunting hearth amid the rubble she paces and she broods the beginning of her trouble where once her love was wooed She paces and she broods in the place where a house had been where once her love was wooed in the dark and shaded glen

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Date: 10/6/2018 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations my friend on a well-deserved win! You are amazing!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/6/2018 2:02:00 PM
Thank you, friend! ;)
Date: 10/5/2018 11:08:00 PM
Well done, Rhona. Congrats on your win.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/6/2018 2:01:00 PM
Thanks, Line! ;)
Date: 10/5/2018 7:58:00 PM
Well-done, Rhona! CONGRATS! Janice
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/5/2018 9:27:00 PM
Thank you so much!! ;)
Date: 10/5/2018 5:26:00 PM
An excellent poem Rhona, much enjoyed, congrats :)
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/5/2018 5:38:00 PM
Thank you so much- glad you enjoyed it! ;)
Date: 10/5/2018 5:12:00 PM
A well done spooky poem, really liked the rhyming form, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/5/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so very much- I am honored!!! ;)
Date: 9/27/2018 11:43:00 AM
I like the ominous tone of this well-written poem, my friend. I have been to a place where energies refuse to let a breeze blow, and it is something you feel.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/27/2018 12:00:00 PM
Yes, although the "lady of the house" is pure invention, the 'dark and shaded glen' 'where a house had been' was not... I remember exploring that place as a child and always feeling a disturbing "stillness" there.

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