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 Spooky Halloween Rhyme Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin.

Spooky Ghostly Halloween the sky looks like velveteen. Wild loud howls, nowhere to be seen, echo through of the wolverine. The citrine moon hangs, high, a wicked smile, cunning, and sly. In a blink of a dominant eye bats chase the clouds across the sky. Eerie, Pumpkin Head quite brickle, waving its sharp rusty sickle. Haunting nightmares hairs prickle as crows fickle blood caw, caw trickle. In the old manor her ghostly spirit appears roaming through it. Do you see it? 10/17/2023

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Date: 11/2/2023 4:24:00 PM
Eve, a great Halloween poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 10/18/2023 6:36:00 AM
Wow, this is such a spooky poem, perfect for the eerie ambience of Halloween and to be honest, I enjoyed reading this so much! Your rhymes are really clever and the way you played with words here, creating dark imageries, ah, just amazing! I love so many lines here "the sky looks like velveteen", "The citrine moon hangs, high", "waving its sharp rusty sickle" Absolutely brilliant! A Fav definitely!!
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Date: 10/18/2023 6:21:00 AM
Almost a sonnet my friend... actually you could say it is a modern sonnet.. PErfect for the season.
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Date: 10/18/2023 1:31:00 AM
Are you sure this is not a brilliant sonnet? So well composed for the festivities of this month. Blessings.
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Date: 10/18/2023 12:11:00 AM
A good description for Halloween. Good poem, (especially the second verse) and pictures. Well written.
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Date: 10/17/2023 10:43:00 PM
The way you paint imagery is beyond impeccable dear talented soul, i am in awe of the way you’ve written this haunting and dark halloween themed poetic tale in such a descriptive and creative manner, i especially love the moon line and the way you’ve also written “ as crows fickle blood caw, caw trickle” clever wordplay and alliterations! Excellent rhymes! definitely a fave for me
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