Spooky End Point

Death nudged me as I slept
on black ice crazy paving 
whispers from a rusty down-pipe
veer across my final midnight abyss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 5:07 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Bad to have a dream about death because that if remember can make the day ahead be lived in fear. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 6:33 AM
Your comments as always go down well with me, Sara. Thanks for your time, Howard
Messina Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 6:23 AM
Awesome poetry, Howard. Great entry for my contest. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. All the best.. Charlie
Kerr Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 6:56 AM
Hi Charles, I would like to thank you for your high opinion of work. Your comments are greatly valued by me. They are a spur. Regards Howard
Somadas Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 11:09 PM
Poetry at the best.. Congrats..
Kerr Avatar
March 3, 2020 at 12:49 AM
Thank you so very much, Jenish. I appreciate your kind review. Congratulations to you as well on your selection and medal win. Howard
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