Split

his armor split near
the crest of the serpent.
no loss is so noble.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:16 AM
I really like this one, Frank. Great little haiku!
Arteaga Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 10:16 PM
so the split of skin of the actual snake, or the scarring of a serpent like person? interesting.
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