Splinters

echoes the attach
splinters of an umiak…
barbed point panges his back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 4:20 AM
Very humorous and enjoyable piece, Robb
Duffin Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Hi Robb. Is this harpoon hunters. Great write. Eamon
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January 11, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Funny one, Robb! Love, Carolyn
Radke Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 12:55 PM
I like this one. Have read it several times. 'Umiak', this is an Inuit canoe, is it not? I like the play on words you have used here. Very good. Deb
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