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Splintered Cycles

slamming shut the door again reverberating in my heart again splintering all my love again locking the front door again opening to my forgiveness again

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Date: 3/13/2024 4:01:00 PM
oh my, the cyclical nature of fractured relationships...you captured them so well...how many times have my husband and I had such moments? Many times.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/13/2024 4:33:00 PM
Most of have had. Sadly.
Date: 3/13/2024 12:46:00 PM
Sounds like hectic, angry moments. It is a lovely poem to human foibles.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/13/2024 1:09:00 PM
Thank you.

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