spleen locus
crimson sky collapsed
in trance ~
distant shore swooning —
dissolved baleen …crescent moon landed
in sunset s p l e e n ~
narrowing focus to locus ______
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Bronze Winner: Shortform Poetry
Prompt : crimson haze
Allpoetry. com : May 26
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