Spitting Watermelon Seeds

Watermelon slices
that smell so ripe and sweet
Take me back in time again
when mother sliced the treat

Sitting in the kitchen
with the window opened wide
Spitting watermelon seeds
out to the other side
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Song Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 5:13 PM
What a trip down memory lane...how fun and youthful! Gotta slice!.... Congrats on this win! :)
Salama  Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 5:50 PM
Yes, it really took me back, and it was fun! As a matter of a fact I went out and bought some watermelon! LOL Thank you very much Gwendolen.
Kearley Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 2:58 PM
:o) We always had to go outside...Ha ha
Salama  Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 4:52 PM
Hey Dan, The only reason I could spit them out the window was because we lived in a second floor apartment that faced the back yard (everything cement - in the Bronx), and the pigeons ate the seeds! LOL :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 8:50 PM
I remember this one that I liked so much. Congrats on your win.
Salama  Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 5:12 AM
Hey Andrea, Thanks again for reading this poem! :)
A   Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 7:15 PM
SAMIA, Congratulations with your wonderful win, In SARA KENDRICK'S "PLEASANT CHILDHOOD MEMORY" contest. take care;-) ~ Always PD
Salama  Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 5:11 AM
Hey PD, Thank you so very much! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations on your place well done xx
Salama  Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 9:46 AM
Hey Mandy, Thank you very much! :)
Brown Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 5:13 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sara's "A Pleasant Childhood Memory" contest Samia. Love, Carol
Salama  Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 5:20 AM
Hey Carol, Thank you very much! :)
Williams Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 1:57 AM
Samia congrats on your win...David
Salama  Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 5:20 AM
Thank you very much David! :)
Nutter Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 5:44 PM
Congratulations on winning, a well deserved honor.
Salama  Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 6:09 PM
Hi Anthony, Thank you so much. I really appreciate it! :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 5:21 PM
Samia, Thanks for participating in my contest..I did not spit the seeds but my children always enjoyed doing that when we had watermelon..Sara
Salama  Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 6:08 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you so much for this! Yes, spitting out the watermelon seeds was almost better than eating the watermelon itself! LOL
Aderounmu Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 7:00 AM
Sweet memories which was in harmony with mine, the seed, the juice and the peels non escapes. Whenever the seeds escape is to have the balls. Thanks samia.
Salama  Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Hi Fisayo, I will have to read your poem. Isn't it a wonderful memory! Thank you! :)
Smith Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 6:11 AM
Good capture of memories. I've enjoyed spitting those slippery seeds.
Salama  Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 6:51 AM
Hey Michael, Thank you very much. I think it's kind of a fun memory - spitting out slippery watermelon seeds! :)
Situation Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 7:24 PM
my fathers father, on every visit, every visit made sure that we had water melon every day. thanks for reminding me.
Salama  Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 6:26 AM
Hi The Situation, I am so glad that this poem brought back happy memories! :)
Horne Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 1:13 PM
Lovely memories indeed - I can remember swallowing the seeds, too lazy to spit, lol. Many congrats on all your wins, my friend : )
Salama  Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 1:54 PM
Hahahaha - Hey Jack, That reminds me of when I used to eat the glue in kindergarten! LOL Thank you so much friend! :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 12:50 AM
this is one of the best: both for the food that you used (it's one of my favorites too) and for the clever way you wrote about it. LOVE it.
Salama  Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 4:24 AM
Hey Andrea, Thank you very much! It truly is what I used to do! LOL :)
Bauer Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 3:09 PM
short and very sweet! nice one!
Salama  Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 5:22 PM
Thank you so much ilene! :)
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