Spitting Watermelon Seeds

Watermelon slices
that smell so ripe and sweet
Take me back in time again
when mother sliced the treat

Sitting in the kitchen
with the window opened wide
Spitting watermelon seeds
out to the other side

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/8/2012 5:13:00 PM
What a trip down memory lane...how fun and youthful! Gotta slice!.... Congrats on this win! :)
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/8/2012 5:50:00 PM
Yes, it really took me back, and it was fun! As a matter of a fact I went out and bought some watermelon! LOL Thank you very much Gwendolen.
Date: 6/7/2012 2:58:00 PM
:o) We always had to go outside...Ha ha
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/7/2012 4:52:00 PM
Hey Dan, The only reason I could spit them out the window was because we lived in a second floor apartment that faced the back yard (everything cement - in the Bronx), and the pigeons ate the seeds! LOL :)
Date: 6/6/2012 8:50:00 PM
I remember this one that I liked so much. Congrats on your win.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/7/2012 5:12:00 AM
Hey Andrea, Thanks again for reading this poem! :)
Date: 6/6/2012 7:15:00 PM
SAMIA, Congratulations with your wonderful win, In SARA KENDRICK'S "PLEASANT CHILDHOOD MEMORY" contest. take care;-) ~ Always PD
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/7/2012 5:11:00 AM
Hey PD, Thank you so very much! :)
Date: 6/6/2012 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your place well done xx
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/6/2012 9:46:00 AM
Hey Mandy, Thank you very much! :)
Date: 6/6/2012 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sara's "A Pleasant Childhood Memory" contest Samia. Love, Carol
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/6/2012 5:20:00 AM
Hey Carol, Thank you very much! :)
Date: 6/6/2012 1:57:00 AM
Samia congrats on your win...David
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/6/2012 5:20:00 AM
Thank you very much David! :)
Date: 6/5/2012 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on winning, a well deserved honor.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/5/2012 6:09:00 PM
Hi Anthony, Thank you so much. I really appreciate it! :)
Date: 6/5/2012 5:21:00 PM
Samia, Thanks for participating in my contest..I did not spit the seeds but my children always enjoyed doing that when we had watermelon..Sara
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/5/2012 6:08:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you so much for this! Yes, spitting out the watermelon seeds was almost better than eating the watermelon itself! LOL
Date: 6/2/2012 7:00:00 AM
Sweet memories which was in harmony with mine, the seed, the juice and the peels non escapes. Whenever the seeds escape is to have the balls. Thanks samia.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/2/2012 1:33:00 PM
Hi Fisayo, I will have to read your poem. Isn't it a wonderful memory! Thank you! :)
Date: 6/1/2012 6:11:00 AM
Good capture of memories. I've enjoyed spitting those slippery seeds.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 6/1/2012 6:51:00 AM
Hey Michael, Thank you very much. I think it's kind of a fun memory - spitting out slippery watermelon seeds! :)
Date: 5/28/2012 7:24:00 PM
my fathers father, on every visit, every visit made sure that we had water melon every day. thanks for reminding me.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 5/29/2012 6:26:00 AM
Hi The Situation, I am so glad that this poem brought back happy memories! :)
Date: 5/27/2012 1:13:00 PM
Lovely memories indeed - I can remember swallowing the seeds, too lazy to spit, lol. Many congrats on all your wins, my friend : )
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 5/27/2012 1:54:00 PM
Hahahaha - Hey Jack, That reminds me of when I used to eat the glue in kindergarten! LOL Thank you so much friend! :)
Date: 5/26/2012 12:50:00 AM
this is one of the best: both for the food that you used (it's one of my favorites too) and for the clever way you wrote about it. LOVE it.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 5/26/2012 4:24:00 AM
Hey Andrea, Thank you very much! It truly is what I used to do! LOL :)
Date: 5/24/2012 3:09:00 PM
short and very sweet! nice one!
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 5/24/2012 5:22:00 PM
Thank you so much ilene! :)
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