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Spiritual Spider Web Haiku



                 sparkles like sugar
                 so sweet symmetrically
                 spins softest songs



                       7/4/2023


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Hind Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 2:05 PM
Beautiful idea. Just beautiful.
Romios Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 4:46 PM
Hello Miss Paige, I hope this finds you writing, and in good spirits. That’s the best way to be.. And thank you for your kindness, and taking the time to reply to comment. Spider Woman Pangie LOL
Goldsmith Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 1:55 PM
A fun Haiku write/colorful picture. Have a fun day...............
Romios Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 4:44 PM
Hey, Paula. Hope that you’re having a great day. I originally had a real picture of a spiderweb, but someone says it look like a CD player so that it’s not a drawing of clout that is the actual painting. I thought it was a fun haiku also. Pangie,, it’s a sunny day and I’m here, relaxing and not writing.
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 7:34 PM
I dunno: Still scares the 'H' out of me! ~ Fear-prone Fosdick
Romios Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Time to grow up.)): Halloween is over, G ..And this was about a spider web not a spider.! There’ s more to be frightened of as you know in this world…like propaganda…Congress…China and a witless POTUS. Add our society that does not know our history, and willing to reelect him. He is friends with all anti American countries but loathes Israel. I Anti Semitism is on the rise, but who cares? Whites are hateful killers ti him let me now what color he is. He supports murder of babies and anyone who votes for him is a co killer! Spiders do not kill the unborn. People are far more dangerous. You best fear humans. Panagiota That is a painting above. I took out the lovely photo of actual web.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 11:58 AM
Hello Panagiota, It is a wonder how the spider spins a beautiful web. Hugs. /Darlene\ xxx
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Hello Panagiota, our fireworks was to last until 11:00o'clock. It went on to 2:00. The people that did the firewoks did not follow the new bylaw. So I was very tired not able to sleep. I think that fireworks should be band. Hugs.| Darlene/xx
Romios Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Hi my friend, I don’t how they create such beauty.Thank-you for understanding and seeing it as well. I have been listening to firecrackers for two nights, they are only legal today .,,the birthday of the USA. Panagiota with Hugs Xxx
Roper Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 9:17 PM
picture looks like a CD... great imagery my friend
Romios Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 10:28 PM
You have a great sense of humor, Eve. I take enormous care to choose what I think is beautiful . Maybe no picture wold be best! Thankyou Panagiota
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