Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Spiritual Pitfalls

The urge to serve
For a feel good factor
Though with gusto and verve
Act of doership, ego the detractor

Hermit resolute
Knows his life's mission 
Recognising ego’s in pursuit
For each act, seeks God's permission

11-October-2022

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Becky Forbes October 10, 2022 at 7:08 PM Love that you categorized this poem as being about "addiction" (having been there - "look at me; i'm so generous!"). So apropos :-) Becky Forbes October 10, 2022 at 7:27 PM Name's Freddy :-) Unseeking Seeker October 10, 2022 at 7:22 PM You are quite perceptive, Betty! :)