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The urge to serve For a feel good factor Though with gusto and verve Act of doership, ego the detractor Hermit resolute Knows his life's mission Recognising ego’s in pursuit For each act, seeks God's permission 11-October-2022

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Date: 10/10/2022 7:08:00 PM
Love that you categorized this poem as being about "addiction" (having been there - "look at me; i'm so generous!"). So apropos :-)
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Becky Forbes
Date: 10/10/2022 7:27:00 PM
Name's Freddy :-)
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/10/2022 7:22:00 PM
You are quite perceptive, Betty! :)

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