Spiritual Feelings

Early morning on arriving home
         kicked off my shoes all alone 
           switched on the computor
             and a man came to me.

               He said i have spirits around me for you 
                  i was speaking to this man for one or two 
                   times before, and what he did say was very accurate 
                     to all the things he put across on my plate.

                        He told me of a child that didnt touch earth
                           and wasn`t because of a bad timed birth
                              we were young at school,and alot with fear 
                                also my partner had a prosperous carreer.

                                  That`s why we chose have it terminated
                                    i wasn`t happy and looking back now hated
                                      the fact that he or she would of been around twenty5
                                        it`s own carreer healthy and alive,

                                           He touched on a number of other subjects
                                             some could relate to  and others reject
                                                but to go from a picture on my from my file
                                                  for an hour spiritual feelings were worth the while.
P.Beadnall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 8:41 PM
inner reflections of an attentive mind, paul.. thank you for joining my MASK contest.... could you kindly check the spelling of the word "lonliness" in your 2nd verse; you might mean " loneliness.." i would suggest you have a look through and update it.. also, when you're ready, please include your name.. thanks, your piece has winning potential like others.. we don;t want to lose big points... so delighted for you! :) huggs
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July 15, 2011 at 5:29 AM
Hi Nette, thank you for your kind comment on my poem Spiritual Feelings. Also correcting my spelling and other mistakes i made that would be points deductable, which i wasn`t aware of. I was over the moon with your choice of subjects for your contest category.. Thanks again .. Bless up . Paul.
Johnson Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Interesting point making write, very powerful too. good on ya mate, Don
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July 10, 2011 at 12:40 PM
this was a powerful write nicely done. cory
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