Laura Leiser Poet Diamante

Spiritual Dichotomy

angels
                         pure, faithful 
              watching, helping, protecting
             messengers, spirits, traitors, fiends 
               cunning, plotting, scheming 
                         hateful, fallen
                             demons





Written on 6/21/2019

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Connie Marcum Wong July 2, 2019 at 5:01 PM Wow Laura, this is outstanding! Congratulations on your deserving silver metal! : ) xxoo Laura Leiser July 2, 2019 at 5:58 PM Thanks so much, Connie! :)

Joseph May June 25, 2019 at 7:21 PM Nicely written Laura, Congrats on your win.. Laura Leiser July 2, 2019 at 5:59 PM Thank you,,Joseph! So happy you liked this! :)

Brenda Chiri June 25, 2019 at 6:55 PM Laura congrats on your win!;)

John Gondolf June 22, 2019 at 9:55 AM My initial thought was that you should have gone from demons to angels, but the way you did it has the demons on the bottom so it's perfect. Nicely done, Laura. Best of luck. John Laura Leiser June 22, 2019 at 1:07 PM Thanks, John! I’ve only done one other Diamante poem, so I hope this is correct!

Line Gauthier June 22, 2019 at 7:50 AM Strong diamante with a perfect title. Well penned, Laura. Laura Leiser June 22, 2019 at 1:06 PM Thank you, Line!