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Spirit Seek

Out on the damp porch at daybreak Rain pours from the dark clouds Fog has settled in the valley A bird sings very proud A tree frog croaks piercingly loud Love on his mind this day_ He croaked all night with his lover Maybe he'll go away(to stay) Duty calls even though rain drops Necessary work speaks If only I could soak in peace And the Spirit seek__

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/23/2014 5:31:00 AM
Life's duties always seem to call but moments like this can sprinkle peace upon us, Sara. Thank God that we take the time to appreciate the beauty that has been offered. Soaking in his peace is wonderful, but, I believe the sprinkles are the spice of life. Beautiful poem, my friend...... Robert.
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Date: 7/23/2014 12:05:00 AM
Your offering presented a morn I have had recently myself. Worldly duties and faithful seeking often collide but race takes all that into account and we are always covered by God's love first and foremost. A very fine write my friend!!!!!!
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Date: 7/20/2014 10:19:00 PM
Finding serenity isn't always easy, but I felt very relaxed reading about the birds singing amidst the falling rain! This is a beautiful write, Sara! I loved the imagery in this!
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Date: 7/20/2014 1:54:00 AM
Beautiful images! I adore this write, Sara. - Maria
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Date: 7/20/2014 1:04:00 AM
Excellent. Good imagery write. Enjoyed. TFS
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Date: 7/19/2014 10:43:00 PM
You will seek the spirit, that is who you are, Sara. Very nice one.
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Date: 7/19/2014 4:58:00 PM
After a hard hot day, reading this has a relaxing effect, thanks Sara
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