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Spirit Mountain

Serene Mountain’s so inviting With clad stone cold faces peeking Blue mirror pools so exciting Quivering patches touch my skin Leaning against a moaning wind Rapped in a rapture of heavens grin Inspired by John freeman’s “A Nature Verse contest”

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Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/8/2013 6:13:00 PM

Very nice depiction of a serene place. "leaning against a moaning wind"....a line that gives the poem expressive character. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/20/2011 7:07:00 AM

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Laura. Love and blessings, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2011 2:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Laura. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2011 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Laura

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/18/2011 10:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Laura. Nice going. xxxRalph

John Freeman

Date: 9/18/2011 3:54:00 PM

Laura, beautiful piece, Serene is the word. thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Second place entry. Agape, Moses.

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/18/2011 3:11:00 PM

Very nice write Laura. Congratulations on placing 2nd. Well done

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2011 1:50:00 PM

CONGRATS LAURA ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH LOVELY LINES OF POETRY MY FRIEND..LUV..

Jl Sadberry

Date: 9/17/2011 2:31:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “This Is Absolutely Beautiful As Is The Image It Paints of Yourself My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Laura! *^_^* The Lovely Rhyme Flowed As A Perfect Mountain's River Bringing Splendours of Serenity Unto Ones Own Spirit *^_^* And for Some Reason I Could Envision Your Beauty Standing Aneath Crystal Blue Waterfall *^_^* Very Lovely &, Thank You, for Blessing Myself With Your Precious Visit, My Dear!” *^_^* Two Faves & My Love Unto Your Pretty Light, Always & Forever, Jasper *

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/14/2011 1:46:00 PM

Sensational Laura. The best to you in Moses' contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 9/14/2011 9:58:00 AM

Wonderful Laura!But John wants only 6 lines.Visit his contest page.....regards.

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 9/14/2011 4:19:00 AM

beautiful.....nice one..you are really giving me a inspiration..love your work

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2011 1:30:00 AM

a majestic write Laura my friend.. a stunning piece of creative poetry from the gorgeous photo.. every lines expressive and poignant .. lovely visuals..good luck in this contest luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2011 11:07:00 PM

wow, you sure nailed this contest. What a gem, laura. Sure to do well!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/13/2011 10:18:00 PM

A lovely verse that has a native Indian feel to it. I could imagine them in this environment and love the images you paint with words.