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Spirit Mountain

Serene Mountain’s so inviting
With clad stone cold faces peeking
Blue mirror pools so exciting 
Quivering patches touch my skin 
Leaning against a moaning wind 
Rapped in a rapture of heavens grin 

Inspired by John freeman’s “A Nature Verse contest”

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Karen Anglesey

August 8, 2013 at 6:13 PM

Very nice depiction of a serene place. "leaning against a moaning wind"....a line that gives the poem expressive character. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 20, 2011 at 7:07 AM

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Laura. Love and blessings, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 21, 2011 at 2:13 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Laura. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 19, 2011 at 12:20 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Laura

Ralph Taylor

September 18, 2011 at 10:40 PM

Congrats on your win, Laura. Nice going. xxxRalph

John Freeman

September 18, 2011 at 3:54 PM

Laura, beautiful piece, Serene is the word. thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Second place entry. Agape, Moses.

Bob Quigley

September 18, 2011 at 3:11 PM

Very nice write Laura. Congratulations on placing 2nd. Well done

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 18, 2011 at 1:50 PM

CONGRATS LAURA ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH LOVELY LINES OF POETRY MY FRIEND..LUV..

Jl Sadberry

September 17, 2011 at 2:31 PM

Smile, *^_^* “This Is Absolutely Beautiful As Is The Image It Paints of Yourself My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Laura! *^_^* The Lovely Rhyme Flowed As A Perfect Mountain's River Bringing Splendours of Serenity Unto Ones Own Spirit *^_^* And for Some Reason I Could Envision Your Beauty Standing Aneath Crystal Blue Waterfall *^_^* Very Lovely &, Thank You, for Blessing Myself With Your Precious Visit, My Dear!” *^_^* Two Faves & My Love Unto Your Pretty Light, Always & Forever, Jasper *

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 14, 2011 at 1:46 PM

Sensational Laura. The best to you in Moses' contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

September 14, 2011 at 9:58 AM

Wonderful Laura!But John wants only 6 lines.Visit his contest page.....regards.

Prince Ekpemandu

September 14, 2011 at 4:19 AM

beautiful.....nice one..you are really giving me a inspiration..love your work

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 14, 2011 at 1:30 AM

a majestic write Laura my friend.. a stunning piece of creative poetry from the gorgeous photo.. every lines expressive and poignant .. lovely visuals..good luck in this contest luv..