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Spirit Heat

My rib pain creeps through my body. when I exhale, the air heat rises.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/23/2021 6:59:00 AM
Powerful imagery. Meaningful Monoku, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings
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Date: 6/23/2021 4:49:00 AM
Emotive--well expressed, Lasaad.
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Date: 6/23/2021 1:28:00 AM
I relate to this. I get many hot spells during the day.
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Date: 6/22/2021 10:19:00 PM
Beautiful picture.
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