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Spirit Heat

My rib pain creeps through my body. when I exhale, the air heat rises.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Trifiatis Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Powerful imagery. Meaningful Monoku, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 4:49 AM
Emotive--well expressed, Lasaad.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 1:28 AM
I relate to this. I get many hot spells during the day.
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 10:19 PM
Beautiful picture.
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