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Spirit Born Out of Despair

Disappointed she bends on her knees Ears shut, not to catch his brutal words anymore Spilling her painful tears on the floor Desperately prays for her dilemma to freeze! Mind recollects..... Soon after her wedding ceremony Life started pedalling her emotions strangely Darkness had swallowed her insanely; And lamely egressed her love harmony. He thwarted her from achieving goals Surrendering to his orders, She feared to cross borders Neither sneaked out for short strolls. Will she opt for a mutual divorce? Unable to bear the impact of desertion How long can she survive with no affection? Unhealthy relationship might not reinforce; She needs to sort out As this is utter ridiculous Being very meticulous With a well planned route ..!
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Somadas Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 2:41 AM
Your enclosed rhyme brilliantly freeing trapped emotions of a dislocated relationship.. She needs to sort out.. That is the key.. Good luck in the contest..
Deepa Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 2:51 AM
Hello Jenish sir, Good evening.:-) Thankyou for investing your precious time to give me your valuable feedback. Yes, that is the key for her. :-) Thanks for wishing me.Best wishes for all your works too..:-) I believe your doing well ! Take care.Warmest regards sent :-)
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