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Spirit Born Out of Despair

Disappointed she bends on her knees 
    Ears shut, not to catch his brutal words anymore
         Spilling her painful tears on the floor
     Desperately prays for her dilemma to freeze!

                      Mind recollects.....

           Soon after her wedding ceremony
    Life started pedalling her emotions strangely
        Darkness had swallowed her insanely;
      And lamely egressed her love harmony.

        He thwarted her from achieving goals
                Surrendering to his orders,
              She feared to cross borders
          Neither sneaked out for short strolls.

             Will she opt for a mutual divorce?
          Unable to bear the impact of desertion
        How long can she survive with no affection?
     Unhealthy relationship might not reinforce;

                     She needs to sort out
                   As this is utter ridiculous
                   Being very meticulous
                   With a well planned rout ..! 

Aug 5, 2020

Note1:Be inspired poetry Contest.(N/A)

Placed as Honorable Mention in the Contest.
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any form,any theme Poetry Contest.

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Jenish Somadas

Date: 8/5/2020 2:41:00 AM

Your enclosed rhyme brilliantly freeing trapped emotions of a dislocated relationship.. She needs to sort out.. That is the key.. Good luck in the contest..

V. Deepa
Date: 8/5/2020 2:51:00 AM

Hello Jenish sir, Good evening.:-) Thankyou for investing your precious time to give me your valuable feedback. Yes, that is the key for her. :-) Thanks for wishing me.Best wishes for all your works too..:-) I believe your doing well ! Take care.Warmest regards sent :-)