Spirit

oh what melody could my spirit's breath draw from after hours' solace Senryu On Your Own Existence

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/4/2015 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/4/2015 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations! I enjoyed your winning piece.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/3/2015 10:14:00 PM

Wonderful senryu amelie, congrats on super win!

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:46:00 PM

Hi Amelie, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:24:00 PM

Amelie, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 4:46:00 PM

this is fantastic, Amelie. Congrats for your win.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/3/2015 4:32:00 PM

A lovely senryu, Amelie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

John Lawless

Date: 7/3/2015 9:44:00 AM

Well done Amelie a simple, poignant reflection on love. Congrats on the high placement.

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 7/3/2015 4:46:00 AM

Great Amelie! Congratz!