poem written based upon this image--online poetry class assignment
a spiral rises where the pond meets dawn, its tender curve ascending toward the leaf; the forest breathes as new creation’s drawn. Light scatters softly on the waking lawn, confetti cast in moments bright and brief; a spiral rises where the pond meets dawn. the dewy emerald margin, newly born, receives the arc with quiet, trembling grief; the forest breathes as new creation’s drawn. in fluid dance, the fern’s first shape is sworn, its curling vow a testament of belief; a spiral rises where the pond meets dawn. the forest floor, by shimmering light adorned, holds sacred space for nature’s turning motif; the forest breathes as new creation’s drawn. so the day begins, its promise worn in curves that rise beyond all earthly grief~ a spiral rises where the pond meets dawn; the forest breathes as new creation’s drawn.
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