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Spiral

Into pitch
Never black
Way out 
Arms stretched 
Reach for 
Divinity

Otherwise
Reverse

Overly opaque bones
Underestimated terror
Trembling shrill tones
Waking the death-bearer
Armed to the teeth
Raging empty sheath
Damned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/18/2011 8:17:00 AM
Hi Tim, I could apply this to mental instability or war but I guess both are intertwined. Frightening images you describe but they ring true!
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