Spinning

Life is a whirlwind spinning out of control.
It's hard to keep up, and stress takes it's toll

It's like a spiral effect,
when ourselves we neglect.

When we injure our soul
it leaves a big hole.

It's hard to repair
and not taking care,

will leave you lonely
It will be just you only.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 4:55 PM
I can see a vortex here...and if we are not careful we could easily be swallowed in it! well written Karen; enjoyed. // paul
Murphy Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 5:07 PM
Thank you Paul!! Spinning was an olddddddd poem and didn't even have a title. And last night when I posted it The title came to me.
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