Spinning

Head throbbing
My health it is robbing
Throat is scratchy
Voice is patchy

Nose is running
This is so not cunning
My nose is red
Pain in my head

My body aches
Dang, the pain stakes
Things are spinning
I am never winning

So just let me sleep 
For at least a week
I am in the sic zone
So leave me alone

While I get over this illness
And overcome my brain's stillness...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 22, 2009 at 10:26 PM
Wow, you are really going through something we can all relate to..Very descriptive and well written...I hope you feel better soon, just relax and eat some chicken soup..I loved this line(So just let me sleep For at least a week I am in the sic zone So leave me alone.. Take care..Great write*God Bless Tyesha
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