Spin

All along, it’s always spinning! Spinning always out of control!! The whole time never falling, but It never had a soul! Symbolically Becoming, the meaning of our Lives, the spinning top keeps Spinning, as if it was alive! So when you feel the Spiral and not know Where begins, Look for The top That Sp I N S ! …………Let the top spin and fall so you don’t have to!..............
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Reynolds Avatar
January 10, 2009 at 3:09 AM
Awesome top and words of wisdom, well done!!! the concrete poems are so hard to format, especially on the soup, so i know how long this took! Love, Kristin
Richards Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 5:45 PM
Wonderful and imaginative poem, Michael. Words profond and the form perfect! Well done!~ Carrie
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January 9, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Beautiful!! And so creative. Wow! This is an artistic piece. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen
Austin Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 3:45 PM
GREAT write! The form and idea are perfect, Mike. I'll remember your advice. Love, daver
Daniells Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 3:28 PM
great work on the form...good job
Ehigiator Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 1:53 PM
This one's lovely , and I love the way it's formed and shaped. Great write..Tyesha
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