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All along, it’s always spinning! Spinning always out of control!! The whole time never falling, but It never had a soul! Symbolically Becoming, the meaning of our Lives, the spinning top keeps Spinning, as if it was alive! So when you feel the Spiral and not know Where begins, Look for The top That Sp I N S ! …………Let the top spin and fall so you don’t have to!..............

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Date: 1/10/2009 3:09:00 AM
Awesome top and words of wisdom, well done!!! the concrete poems are so hard to format, especially on the soup, so i know how long this took! Love, Kristin
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Date: 1/9/2009 5:45:00 PM
Wonderful and imaginative poem, Michael. Words profond and the form perfect! Well done!~ Carrie
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Date: 1/9/2009 4:37:00 PM
Beautiful!! And so creative. Wow! This is an artistic piece. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen
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Date: 1/9/2009 3:45:00 PM
GREAT write! The form and idea are perfect, Mike. I'll remember your advice. Love, daver
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Date: 1/9/2009 3:28:00 PM
great work on the form...good job
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Date: 1/9/2009 1:53:00 PM
This one's lovely , and I love the way it's formed and shaped. Great write..Tyesha
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