Spilt Scenery

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Spilt Scenery Moon bunts as a saffron sun advances o'er a horizon, Spring's dabbled hues tender hearts a growthful bounty, Love sprung amidst the fluttering of its emerald leaves, High upon mounds beneath an affectionate bluish peak, Cascading conduit spews of embracing inclined surrender, Drench fondly nestling crystal waters of a chanting stream, There search I this penchant lost in its cooling wetness, Burbling budding blooms caressing banks of moving voyage, Subtle surging touching midst rocks passionate swerving, Till a mouth kisses a lake and surges sweet smacks ashore. 2020 March 24 *3rd Place* STRAND CHOICE O,any form,any theme ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 March 24

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 3/24/2020 5:19:00 PM

Congrats on your win!;)

Hilo Poet
Date: 3/24/2020 6:53:00 PM

Thank you, Brenda -- Aloha!~@wk