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Spilling Thoughts

Spilling thoughts on white paper
seemed so easy but just mistaken
Painting words with craft unshaken
takes time like building a skyscraper.

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Poet Destroyer A

March 17, 2014 at 4:50 PM

Hi Destiny, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 17, 2014 at 5:36 AM

A well penned poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, destiny

Aparna A.

March 18, 2014 at 8:04 AM

thank you :)

Poet Destroyer A

March 8, 2014 at 6:19 AM

Destiny, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

February 25, 2014 at 3:50 AM

Destiny, . Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 24, 2014 at 11:21 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Destiny - I choose your first nice written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aparna A.

February 25, 2014 at 3:03 AM

yay! I am a soup member now...so excited! :)

Adam -- Eve

February 24, 2014 at 11:05 AM

Destiny, your thoughts spill well. Love the last line, it makes me want to say "WOW!" You took the imagery all the way to the top. Welcome to poetry soup. Love: Eve Menace

Aparna A.

February 25, 2014 at 3:01 AM

thanks for the kind words:)

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