Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes:  I wrote this "Septet" entitled:  "Spill Ink" to honor all poets in our profession who work so hard and and know all too well the difficult work associated with researching and writing a poem late at night into the wee hours of the morning.  I've used the "Septet"  poetic format which consists of a seven-line stanza of varying meter and rhyme.  In this Septet, I employed an AA BB CC rhyming sequence in the first six lines, followed by a final asymmetrical line, "D" for special emphasis and set off from the symmetry of the original rhyming sequence.  (Note:  With this poem, I chose to craft all of the verses in Iambic Pentameter rather than going with varying meter.)  For me, as a poet and writer, it was quite important to capture a vision of the "Spill Ink" mantra as it relates to what all of us do and try to accomplish as poets.  (Gary Bateman - October 18, 2014) (Rhyme Septet)

Categories:  allegory, dedication, introspection, muse, philosophy, poetry, and poets.

The technical parameters of this Septet are rendered as follows:

Syllables Per Line:  10

Total # Syllables:  70

Total # Lines:  7

Total # Words:  49

Rhyme Sequence:  aa|bb|cc|d

Meter:  Iambic Pentameter

 

Spill Ink

Spill Ink—the poets’ timeless warp and woof;
Signifies our mantra beyond reproof;
Late at night as poets struggle to write;
Our Muse enchants poets to such delight;
Poets seek tone and tenor for a splash,
And images and nuance for a dash.
"Spill Ink!” Poets cry seeking perfection!

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved 
(October 18, 2014) (Rhyme Septet)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kiser Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 3:13 PM
A wonderful description of me...love to write at night and I'm told that I do my best pieces then.
Bateman Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 6:24 PM
ML . . . This definitely applies to me too. I'm a Night Owl!! Always, Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 12:23 PM
Hi my dear friend Gary! You've penned this so nice! Enjoyed it!:) Good luck in the contest! Have a great weekend! And always remember... Spill the ink! ;) Lol.. Take care! love and light! xxxx D.
Bateman Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 3:15 PM
Great hearing from you "D"!! I wish you too a very nice weekend (ein Schoenes Wochenende)!! Glad you like this little write of mine on "Spill Ink." This has become my poetic mantra (among others)!! Cheers and Best Wishes and Spill Ink!! Gary
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 8:32 AM
:) thank you for the commentes :) am glad that this what I chose. :) Love the information you shared . :) this form is best on short poems. :) Your poem is inspiring.. :) Your first two lines arw amazing.. :) the adition of using musical words intensifies the poem adding color :) yes i agree spill ink. :)
Bateman Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 9:19 PM
Olive, I will check out the other poems you mentioned below. I has some more too: A Poet's View on Words and a couple of others. You should take a look at them as well. Cheers, Gary
Bateman Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Olive . . . Muchas Gracias Senora!! I do really enjoy the metered writes. I particularly liked doing "Spill Ink." It quite succinctly describes what we struggling poets actually do and it does so with few words. I always write Author's Notes which accompany all of my poems as posted. Take Care and Stay in Touch!! Spill Ink!! Gary!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 9:08 AM
by the way I have poems on same theme.. :) CHARM OF POETRY, PEN THE WORLD WITH A PLEASING MIND, POETRY FORM And a villanele etc.. . :) indeed as Paul said wroting is one good loyal company.. :)
Yvonne Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 10:03 PM
You nailed it Gary!
Bateman Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 2:03 PM
Thanks Maurice!! Spill Ink!! is now my Battle Cry!! Cheers, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 10:24 AM
love how you drew this excellent pen gary i am steady spilling ink smiling
Bateman Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 2:07 PM
Spill Ink!! must be our battle cry Liam!! Cheers, Gary
Gifford Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 12:21 PM
I can relate to this poem, Gary, and I wish I could give it a 10 rating. It's a true portrayal of what a poet experiences! And I sometimes wonder what the neighbors think when my lights go on and off at night as new thoughts come to me and I have to write them down before they fade from memory. If they think I am entertaining, they are right! I am entertaining the Muse to visit as often as it wishes! And thanks, for reading my Thoreau Poem. Blessings, Darlene
Gifford Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 7:07 PM
Thank you, Gary, for saying you intend to follow me. I welcome this and will do the same with you. I understand this does not mean commenting on every poem, but occasionally checking in with each other. Poet friends share a special bond through the love of poetry. And can uplift, support, encourage and share their thoughts with each other. I welcome this! I'm living in Ca. Hope you are doing well in Germany. I have never been out of the USA.
Bateman Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 1:19 PM
Hello Darlene, Thanks for visiting and I've marked you as a FAV poet so I can check your works regularly whenever I can stay caught up to do so. Glad you like this Septet write. I'm here in Germany and I was pretty much up most of last night communing with Our Muse and Spilling Ink!! Best Wishes!! Gary
Vaso Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 11:31 PM
I loved this, hint, no ink spilled on one of my last! LOL
Bateman Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 5:09 AM
Thanks Arthur!! "Spill Ink" is, of course, a metaphor and I'm glad no ink spilled on one of your last (literally). Cheers and Best Wishes, Gar
Vaso Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 11:31 PM
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