Cesar Cantu Poet I do not know?

Spiderweb

Compressed predator instincts
Exist in the most primitive dimension

Textile complex of nerves
Mixture of nebulas and herbs
Blinking imperfect echoes

Is it a crop of static points?
Yet there’s no sign of growth
No sprouting into a G minor code
A multi-fingered park
For a suicide octagon roll?

Most probably
Horde of wormholes on the wall
Dementia brought cheese mentality

Expose your paper gestures
And fold
Extreme fisherman-frontal jump
Into the scribbled reflections of
A starving point

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Jay Loveless October 16, 2009 at 9:59 AM i love this one. Monkey face @(0.0)@~ (Saj lol inside joke) is way right. some of your stuff reminds me of pink floyd lol. love your work though, its complicated and has integrety. xo Raiin

Rebecca Pasco June 21, 2009 at 6:22 AM I love the poem.but i hate spider.lol Thanks for the poem comment.

James Marshall Goff June 14, 2009 at 11:43 AM your poetic leaps within lines are very cool!! Jim

Izzy Gumbo May 28, 2009 at 10:49 PM Yes, again and again I fall into love within the soup. very nice web Cesar. :)

Debbie Guzzi May 28, 2009 at 12:45 PM wow what a ride!..verse 1 OK...2 verse ? A textual complex of nerves/ mixed with nexuses and verve/ blink with imperfect echos..perhaps? Verse 3 A crop of static points/ No sign of growth/ No linear G minor code/A multi-fingered spoke parked/angluar perimeter set for a suicide roll? Verse 4 ? Verse 5 Expose your silken gestures/Reweave the net/Extreme fisher of the frontal lobes get/Reflect your angnst into a straving point. ..Perhaps that makes more collerlation to title? Light&Love

Sharon Winter May 28, 2009 at 7:48 AM Complicated your writing, yet so fascinating. I find I can read this (need to actually) many times and get something new each time. Amazing. Love, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire May 27, 2009 at 1:58 PM Love your comparison of the spider's form to "A multi-fingered park For a suicide octagon roll." They do like creatures from a primitive era. You have a very interesting writing style and spiders make a great topic. Excellent writing, Cesar! Love, Carolyn

Sajdah Al-Riyami May 27, 2009 at 1:26 AM I Find your description of this subject quite A Pretty.I Know the song Interstellar Overdrive by Pink Floydd*Have it on my phone:p*So yee You Do resemble itXP Great Words,C. XoJojo