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Spiderweb

Compressed predator instincts Exist in the most primitive dimension Textile complex of nerves Mixture of nebulas and herbs Blinking imperfect echoes Is it a crop of static points? Yet there’s no sign of growth No sprouting into a G minor code A multi-fingered park For a suicide octagon roll? Most probably Horde of wormholes on the wall Dementia brought cheese mentality Expose your paper gestures And fold Extreme fisherman-frontal jump Into the scribbled reflections of A starving point

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/16/2009 9:59:00 AM
i love this one. Monkey face @(0.0)@~ (Saj lol inside joke) is way right. some of your stuff reminds me of pink floyd lol. love your work though, its complicated and has integrety. xo Raiin
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Date: 6/21/2009 6:22:00 AM
I love the poem.but i hate spider.lol Thanks for the poem comment.
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Date: 6/14/2009 11:43:00 AM
your poetic leaps within lines are very cool!! Jim
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Date: 5/28/2009 10:49:00 PM
Yes, again and again I fall into love within the soup. very nice web Cesar. :)
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Date: 5/28/2009 12:45:00 PM
wow what a ride!..verse 1 OK...2 verse ? A textual complex of nerves/ mixed with nexuses and verve/ blink with imperfect echos..perhaps? Verse 3 A crop of static points/ No sign of growth/ No linear G minor code/A multi-fingered spoke parked/angluar perimeter set for a suicide roll? Verse 4 ? Verse 5 Expose your silken gestures/Reweave the net/Extreme fisher of the frontal lobes get/Reflect your angnst into a straving point. ..Perhaps that makes more collerlation to title? Light&Love
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Date: 5/28/2009 7:48:00 AM
Complicated your writing, yet so fascinating. I find I can read this (need to actually) many times and get something new each time. Amazing. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:58:00 PM
Love your comparison of the spider's form to "A multi-fingered park For a suicide octagon roll." They do like creatures from a primitive era. You have a very interesting writing style and spiders make a great topic. Excellent writing, Cesar! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:26:00 AM
I Find your description of this subject quite A Pretty.I Know the song Interstellar Overdrive by Pink Floydd*Have it on my phone:p*So yee You Do resemble itXP Great Words,C. XoJojo
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