Spider Web Strung Out

spider web strung out geometrical design... golden ripe pear falls

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Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/25/2012 9:46:00 AM

Nice Haiku, I liked the last line. A completely new observation as if the per falling was seen while viewing the spider web. Nice

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/25/2012 7:13:00 AM

sticky cituation??! daddy had the web stuck to his hat. have a good day.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/24/2012 2:26:00 PM

another clever haiku, my friend - can see this one : )

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/24/2012 12:43:00 PM

You have spun a fantastic write my friend! I'm really enjoying these cleverly penned Haiku that you have been writing! What a fully delightful poem, one that I have enjoyed reading this afternoon! Great Work!!

Kash Poet

Date: 9/24/2012 12:30:00 PM

Another good haiku Sara.Enjoyed the read.