Spider Web

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spider web tightly strung between old brick columns.. unphased by fall's winds human hair now filled with sticky yuck spider web... hard head wins battle

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/25/2016 7:03:00 AM

Fantastic haikus! (: A liked both of them very much. You have a creative writing style that is great! -JWE

Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2016 8:53:00 AM

Webs are indeed strong, Sara, but like everything else, including humans, they have their weak points! I also dislike walking into webs that unnoticeably cross my path:) Regards // paul

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/11/2016 10:10:00 PM

Cute... but don't call it yuck. This yuck is one of the strongest fibrous proteins.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/12/2016 6:32:00 AM

The spider web stood up to winds in our area of around 20 miles an hour gusts maybe more so the point was that it was strong but when a human walks or runs into it then it is broken..LOL..I do hate to get the web on me because of the yucky, sticky feel of it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Chris Green

Date: 10/10/2016 9:43:00 AM

This is cute and funny and something my hard head is quite familiar with.

Paloma P

Date: 10/10/2016 9:34:00 AM

This is adorable, I just wrote a spider poem in fact, I like yours better! :)