Spider Web

spider web tightly
strung between old brick columns..  
unphased by fall's winds

human hair now filled 
with sticky yuck spider web...
hard head wins battle

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David William Breidenthal

December 25, 2016 at 7:03 AM

Fantastic haikus! (: A liked both of them very much. You have a creative writing style that is great! -JWE

Paul Callus

October 16, 2016 at 8:53 AM

Webs are indeed strong, Sara, but like everything else, including humans, they have their weak points! I also dislike walking into webs that unnoticeably cross my path:) Regards // paul

Pashang Salehi

October 11, 2016 at 10:10 PM

Cute... but don't call it yuck. This yuck is one of the strongest fibrous proteins.

Sara Kendrick

October 12, 2016 at 6:32 AM

The spider web stood up to winds in our area of around 20 miles an hour gusts maybe more so the point was that it was strong but when a human walks or runs into it then it is broken..LOL..I do hate to get the web on me because of the yucky, sticky feel of it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara