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Spider Tickles

There's something about spiders that don't agree with me
Though I understand their importance in nature's society
A wishful thought, I like to imagine, I have with them
Is to maintain a distance in our zone shared realm

But seems some like to crawl around and over me
Each time when it happens, I'm flailing wildly
Every little tickle feels me with horror and dread
Wondering if it's a spider I fear yet still respect

One was on my shoulder that appeared from nowhere
A teenager of its species if to guess an age that's fair
How and why they get on me is a mystery to me
I'm sure that ninja spider is teaching them with glee 

When I was sleeping, one walked along my arm
Gauged it in the darkness then flicked it off without harm
I heard it land on something a short distance away 
I felt brave and removed it when I saw it next day

Outside or inside, they always find a way on me
Maybe I should feel honoured not just feel unlucky
Not one has ever bitten me, they just give me a fright
I will never harm one, no matter their size or height

But wish they would stop giving such a scary surprise
With space all around them they have freedom paradise
Nature is my passion and respect all that lives within
But these spiders will steer me to drink a double gin.

       21.01.21

*Ninja Spider is reference to a poem I wrote last year*
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Laurie Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 5:13 PM
Hello Emilia … I guess I’m one of the few people who enjoy a spider’s company. We have a huntsman here that live inside and are quite big but harmless - thank you Emilia - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 6:54 AM
I know many shriek when they see them, they don't bother me and I always catch them and put them outside. A thing I don't understand is how some of those big ones get in the house. Tom
James Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 3:21 PM
I think their like mice can get through any small gaps. Had one in my porch once, was big as a tarantula, that one I had to get someone else to remove and was then released into one of the fields. Emilia : )
Summers Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Liked the poem. Fortunately I learned to identify some of the poisonous ones the others I try to leave unbothered. Cute picture! John
James Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Thank you J. I think the false widow spider is the most venomous spider in the UK. I leave them unbothered they just bother me lol, Emilia : )
Mcconnell Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Lovely pen Emilia, nice rhyme and flow too. Keep spilling the ink!
James Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Thank you Gordon, glad you enjoyed, take care, Emilia : )
Gondolf Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 6:40 AM
I don't mind the spiders but I certainly wouldn't want them crawing all over me. Cute poem, Emilia, enjoyed the read. Hugs, John
James Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 3:05 PM
Thank you John, happy that you enjoyed. The bigger they are the worse I am lol, Hugs, Emilia : )
Jayasankar Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 4:39 AM
Haha... you made me laugh... Emilia. Am ok with spiders. But lizards... Oh my... am so irritated and scared by them, whereas my son is ok with lizards but scared of spiders like you. Lol. Good that you do not harm them. I will show this poem to my son. Hugs ~ Ani
James Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 3:03 PM
Don't mind lizards, not even sure why I have a fear of spiders though is very common. Thank you for showing your son my poem hope it makes him smile too, Emilia : )
Romios Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 4:05 AM
LOL...never had one on me..Yikes. I find only one or two a year. Tiny things, I find in my kitchen sink. Maybe they just like you! Thank you for not harming them. I try to get them a paper and put them outdoors..great Poem. Love your last line.))) Pangie
James Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Outside or inside they tend to find me. Don't mind the money spiders but they never bring me any lol, Emilia : )
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 3:03 PM
eww they give me the creeps , I am not a fan of doiders as we call them - son couldn't say incy wincy spider he called it doider and the name has stuck ////00\\\\. hugs Jan xx
James Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 3:26 PM
I think they know my fear lol, awww that is a cute name for them. The big ones scare me the most, Emilia : )
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