Spicy

As the sun rises casting purple Upon wispy low clouds There's a brief coolness in the air For the fireball shines proud Its color shifts to a golden glow The clouds now more icy Soon the day will warm to Cayene A pepper so spicy Some like it hot, enjoy the heat Some like it cooled nicely Some somewhat neutral, inbetween Spring and autumn concisely It has been hot ones yesterday and today..

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/29/2014 5:34:00 PM

A spicy write my friend. I love hot food, hot days and a hot time in the old town tonight! lol This stanza stands out as special to me! "As the sun rises casting purple Upon wispy low clouds There's a brief coolness in the air For the fireball shines proud" A very cool one it is !!!!!!! I envy that gem my friend...

Tim Smith

Date: 7/28/2014 5:04:00 PM

It all depends what I am doing...If I am working I like it cool but otherwise I am neutral....Beautiful write Sara

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/28/2014 4:13:00 PM

It has been abnormally cold at night for this time of the year here, but we have had some warm days following the cool nights, you have a great description of the temperature, I am a neutral kind of girl :) Hugs:)