Sara Kendrick Poet Verse

Spices Bouquet

Rumbles roar
Waterfall's bellows pitch
Misty spray sprinkles rocks quinces thirst

Soft moist moss
Springs forth upon hard rock
Constant moisture encourages growth

Yell water
Rush, reverberate
Crash, clamor upon solid firm stone

Fresh clean air
Scented with spring flowers
Crisp lavender spices' bouquet untouched  

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest:Forms Of Crystalline
Theme: Waterfalls
Written by: Sara Kendrick
Today, October 31, 2014

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Paul Callus November 1, 2014 at 7:55 AM Ohhh from the title I had not realized this was for the waterfall contest! Yours, too, is uniquely tackled. The way it flows, it sort of reminds me of Olive_eloi's style of writing. gl in the contest. // paul

Andrea Dietrich October 31, 2014 at 8:47 PM I agree with Jan here. You have some lovely alliteration in this one. I suggest you use the syllable counter she provided. Moist I believe has only one syllable. I ought to use it to recheck MY poem for her as well!! Oh and I loved your mention of lavender.

Andrea Dietrich October 31, 2014 at 8:46 PM Sara, the poem you commented on of mine today did not have to be precise meter, I just enjoy writing that way. So you should try that contest. he does prefer rhyme though. Let me see this one now!!

Jan Allison October 31, 2014 at 2:22 PM love the imagery and the alliteration in this delightful write - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

David Meade October 31, 2014 at 11:41 AM Ah, all of my senses were treated to this delightful poem. All the best.

Dorian Petersen Potter October 31, 2014 at 11:24 AM A nice picture you've painted here, Sara! Happy Halloween! ;) xxxx D.

Phyllis Babcock October 31, 2014 at 10:45 AM I can smell the fresh air in this wonderful poem Sara. Nice and picturesque. love phyl