Spice of Life

As I explore the outer space, And make connections, introspections Nonplussed, but given to the chase- The Fate of Fools’ directions! Too much I’ve asked! And too late, perhaps When I am taken to the task How long I wrought, how strong I fought, To never see the Truth to pass... *Space & Time Contest Entry*

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Robin Davis

Date: 1/18/2014 10:57:00 PM

Chan The Man This is a creative and unique write. My head is going to explode with thoughts and meaning of this write. LOL Thanks for the awesome comment on my Chaos poem. Love and Hugs Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 1/19/2014 7:36:00 AM

Thanks for being the first to review this one, Sweet Pea! :)