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Spherical Scheme

So simple a ruse I silenced a scream Just gullible enough to fall for your scheme While you're bored and just blowing off steam Now that this con has gathered more steam My frustration has lent volume to my scream How is it I haven't found an exit to this scheme Not a pyramid but more of a spherical scheme As it spins out of control so swiftly it gathers steam And I just, I just. AHHHHHHHHHH. Scream. I scream for this scheme to run out of steam

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Sand Blown

Date: 10/28/2022 9:23:00 PM

...wowza write....all things expand in some order of some sphere(s)....you can let the spheres/bubbles go as they are innately useless.......but, u nu it....ha ha ha.......stans sand

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/28/2022 7:41:00 PM

I so like this poem, Hat, well-written and so clever an idea. Good stuff!

Hat Bueckert
Date: 11/13/2022 7:42:00 PM

Thanks! it was an odd form to write I find

Jeff Kyser

Date: 10/28/2022 5:48:00 PM

That's a form I've not gotten the hang of. Is the last line relief at making it to line 10, lol, enjoyed, Hat.

Hat Bueckert
Date: 11/13/2022 7:41:00 PM

Haha I would say yes, this was tricky!