Spherical Scheme

So simple a ruse I silenced a scream
Just gullible enough to fall for your scheme
While you're bored and just blowing off steam

Now that this con has gathered more steam
My frustration has lent volume to my scream
How is it I haven't found an exit to this scheme

Not a pyramid but more of a spherical scheme
As it spins out of control so swiftly it gathers steam
And I just, I just. AHHHHHHHHHH. Scream.

I scream for this scheme to run out of steam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Blown Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 9:23 PM
...wowza write....all things expand in some order of some sphere(s)....you can let the spheres/bubbles go as they are innately useless.......but, u nu it....ha ha ha.......stans sand
Hankins Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 7:41 PM
I so like this poem, Hat, well-written and so clever an idea. Good stuff!
Bueckert Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 7:42 PM
Thanks! it was an odd form to write I find
Kyser Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 5:48 PM
That's a form I've not gotten the hang of. Is the last line relief at making it to line 10, lol, enjoyed, Hat.
Bueckert Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 7:41 PM
Haha I would say yes, this was tricky!
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