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*Image of Dali's Time Clock by Pixabay. spent time most workers are clock watchers who die by the hours ~ then clock out and live 2021 December 19

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Joe Maverick

Date: 12/27/2021 4:57:00 AM

I sent you a soup mail William, I don't know if You are aware.? No rush though mate.'

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/27/2021 11:05:00 AM

Yes, read--SOUPY! Homeless till 01/?/22...food banks tiny and tinier eyes...paradise yon Hawaii...be joy days ditto yours are...this was last poem ere flight...iPhone overtimed...notes by-and-by, Aloha!

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/22/2021 1:02:00 PM

Many hours witness untold deaths; yet Freedom in Passing.? Tick tocking calculators can't Take it all in' the eternal scope Misjudgement times misanthropy .)

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/22/2021 5:33:00 PM

Joe, yours echo, "A Temporary Ripple", a piece I scraped up early on here. I was a salaried-lifer, no-clock-to-go-by (sigh), DOA! Love your creative remarks my friend, Aloha!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/19/2021 4:03:00 PM

Hello William, yes that is true. Aloha! Darlene Merry Christmas.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/20/2021 11:49:00 AM

Hello William I hope4 you are al ready for Christmas all your Christmas shopping is done.Thank you. I wish the same for you. Aloha! Darlene

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/19/2021 4:23:00 PM

I agree, Darlene, and may this be your season's best, my friend, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/19/2021 10:46:00 AM

Very true! We must spend out time more wisely…be in the moment! Merry Christmas!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/19/2021 10:56:00 AM

Hi Kim, I couldn't have said it better! Truly, may yours be a blessed season my friend, Aloha!