Spent Adult

I adore you, curled and satisfied, 
your beauty full displayed, 
the swell, the fullness of your breasts 
make thoughts of sadness fade. 
Your lips so red and aggravated, 
trembling with desire, 
your form exhausted from the fire, 
my manhood enervated. 

Spent, the zenith of our passion 
sealed and stricken with a kiss, 
we lie content, the aftermath, 
the pinnacle of bliss. 
It's heaven, the summit of our love, 
enshrined in dreams so rare, 
a promise made to order 
with a locket of your hair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 5:44 PM
So, Keith - what did you do today, the first day of the year? I ask only because your poem put me in the gutter and I'm grinning. I truly enjoyed your erotic write, very well done - not only erotic, but lovely and touching ... CayCay
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January 1, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Thanks Cay Cay! Just the kind of review I long for... Best wishes, Keith
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