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Spelunking 2

upon entering the cave space the air became strangely warmer heavy wetness created a single stalactite thickly dripping down naturally the deeper i sunk it seemed dank and darker with only a head lamp the room dampened and divided i decided just then a trembling tremor turned me around but knew i would come back again and again and again

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Date: 7/28/2019 7:03:00 AM
I admire your courage ... I am claustrophobic, I would never enter a cave. I'm afraid of cave and height ... but I'm not afraid of water ... river or sea.   Salute Jeff alkas
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/28/2019 3:31:00 PM
I am not happy about swimming in the ocean; without my glasses I am blind. I feel very uncomfortable not knowing what's swimming around me. But I'm sure you would enter the cave of this poem Alkas jajaja Thanks.

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