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Spell Cast

While you lay awake, what whispers of sensation, are left on your skin? The feel of silence, has filled you with such loud thoughts, of this person here; she has slept enough for you to absorb and smell. The spell she has cast, left you hypnotized. You wish this witch, won't take flight, delicious her might.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/12/2009 10:51:00 PM
Great lines: "The feel of silence, / has filled you with such loud thoughts, / of this person here;" There is a lot of confusion about Haiku and Senryus and how they should be written. However, those lines I mentioned above are just too good. Mail me if you want to discuss Haikus.
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Date: 8/12/2009 6:09:00 PM
spellbinding poem. good. john h loving iii
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Date: 8/12/2009 3:18:00 PM
im spellbound ... great poem, thank you for your warm comments, i definately appreciate them :)
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Date: 8/12/2009 2:46:00 PM
Bewitching, Jessica! You certainly cast your spell with this one. "Loud thoughts" is an excellent oxymoron. Very sensual! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/12/2009 2:45:00 PM
Interesting writing. Sara
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