Spell Bound

there is only one woman
in the whole wide world
one thing that matters
this certian girl
and she fills my mind
both days and nights
her loveliness is my delight
a loveliness i can not requite
so quiet lies my tongue
that would confess so much
about desire for a simple touch
heartless to tell anyone
about this crush
especially her, i love her that much
better to live with a dream
than deal with rejection
secrets are kept for my protection
painfull are the places
we learn this lesson
spending the most of our lives
hiddng from rejection
a man begins to wonder
what is this thing that has me bound
why is her name a wonderful sound
why am i the only one that
watches her the way that i do
i thought i had the answer 
but i do not have a clue
hopeing that she'd notice that i never
denighed her any request
and that she would stay longer
and that was my only test
start a conversation
maybe start a kind of relation.
why do i see her imperfection 
as the most beautiful thing i have searched
and count it as the only worth
that held me bound to the earth
that kept me sound to sanity
and insanity where my minds
looks for moments that we share
looking for opportunity to dare
and hope that you have a snare
to entangle me somewhere
where my imagination
has went wild.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/8/2012 11:17:00 AM
Beautifully wrote from the heart.
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Date: 8/8/2012 11:13:00 AM
Beautiful
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Date: 3/23/2012 4:40:00 PM
Beautiful rhyme John and the emotional content leaves me drained. I'm sure this comes from your heart and the yearning truth of it is so filled with emotion. A 7 and fav for me luv! Nice visits from you, I always enjoy :)
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Date: 3/23/2012 7:26:00 AM
Ahhhh...romance in words....Enjoyed the read this morning !!
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Date: 3/22/2012 11:05:00 AM
Ahhhh!So romantic, John..Enjoyed reading this morning..So creative...Thanks for stopping by..Your poetic comment made my day!..Sara
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Date: 3/22/2012 10:20:00 AM
Hi John. No I have not seem the movie Atlantis but will have to watch it. Thanks for your comments. Hope all is well with you. love phyl
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Date: 3/22/2012 9:01:00 AM
Beautiful John, I hope she comes to realise who she is and that you can let her know.xx Thanks for you lovely comment I wish I could write a bouquet and not just a bunch of flowers for you xx
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Date: 3/22/2012 12:32:00 AM
Emotions dripping off from each crafted word . love this and really waiting for the next part. Write on dear.
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Date: 3/21/2012 9:39:00 PM
So many emotions flowing from your heart,I can nearly hear you sing to her.So beautiful is this poem..I hope she knows how much you care... lovely!We'll be waiting to read the other part.. Charma
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