Spectators Applaud

spectators applaud
as breeze lifts a lady’s skirt - -
a husband scowls

* Marilyn Monroe

For Frank’s Favourite Movie Star contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Haick Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 9:15 PM
Reading your wonderful Haiku, Jack, I can picture the look on Joe Dimaggio's face...he loved her very much! Great job, my friend! Always, Annalise
Kendrick Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 12:36 PM
Great description of the picture..Enjoyed reading this one..You know the way to tell if a lady is from the city or the country?..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Sivey Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 9:57 PM
I got that is was Marilyn even before your revealing comment below the poem! This poem was so good that it was easy to figure out! You did a marvelous job with this remarkable poem! I truly enjoyed reading this enlightening piece this evening! Great Work!!
Posey Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 6:40 PM
Clever, very clever... should do well in the contest.... Jake
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July 9, 2013 at 3:39 PM
Excellent Jack. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
Bauer Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 2:45 PM
ha! very good!
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