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S pacious formation from top to bottom, P ulses a harvest moon in late autumn. E lectric Milky Way explodes in space, C hanging hue spray a blackened canvas face. T witching stars ignite celestial realm, A dmitting dazzling gold to overwhelm. C omets combust across eternal sky, U nleashing brilliance eyes can’t clarify. L unar beauty as far as scopes can see, A llowing man to unlock with magic key; R eveals vague marvels in our galaxy. Copyright © 2016 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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Date: 1/24/2016 4:43:00 PM
dang, this was so good and I bet it was too late for the contest.Well, you got a good poem at least!!
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/24/2016 9:07:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I'm glad you liked it. Yep - late again...
Date: 1/23/2016 3:34:00 PM
Very beautifully written, but then again I am partial to thought out poems that rhyme. I guess I'm showing my age a little. Well done.
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/23/2016 3:59:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Daniel, glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl

Book: Shattered Sighs