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Silver skates the slash of ice Fisticuffs ~ fool's paradise

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David Fisher

Date: 1/11/2024 5:39:00 PM

You have a great talent to make a few words say so much. Fun game to play for the artistry, not the fighting.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/11/2024 6:49:00 PM

I agree, David. I stopped going to fights when hockey games would break out right in the middle. lol.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/11/2024 8:10:00 AM

This sounds like a poem on ice hockey. Thank you for this poem.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/11/2024 6:58:00 PM

You are right. It IS a poem on ice hockey, a sport which is skating on thin ice, methinks.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/11/2024 5:15:00 AM

why do young men want to fight whenever it snows? Why be violent in the face of such beauty....perhaps because they've been couped up...rambling thoughts for this Thursday.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/11/2024 7:00:00 PM

As they say, Youth is wasted on the Young.

John Lawless

Date: 1/11/2024 4:19:00 AM

as it has been noted.....often one goes to a boxing match and a hockey game breaks out

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/11/2024 7:01:00 PM

Exactly, John. lol.