Spectacle

  Silver skates
  the slash of ice

  Fisticuffs ~
    fool's paradise
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Fisher Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 5:39 PM
You have a great talent to make a few words say so much. Fun game to play for the artistry, not the fighting.
Wolf Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 6:49 PM
I agree, David. I stopped going to fights when hockey games would break out right in the middle. lol.
Greenhough Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 8:10 AM
This sounds like a poem on ice hockey. Thank you for this poem.
Wolf Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 6:58 PM
You are right. It IS a poem on ice hockey, a sport which is skating on thin ice, methinks.
Lawless Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 4:19 AM
as it has been noted.....often one goes to a boxing match and a hockey game breaks out
Wolf Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 7:01 PM
Exactly, John. lol.
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