Specific Moment Is When He Begins To Feel

I can get big, fill up a room
till it shines and shimmers, and you
feel uncomfortable sitting there in that thickness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
April 29, 2009 at 1:00 PM
Daniel, congrats on your feature...Raul
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April 28, 2009 at 5:21 PM
Epic. Added to favorites.
Lopez Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 9:22 AM
Daniel, congrats on having your poem featured this week!!!!!!
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April 27, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Congrats Daniel on being featured this week. Vince
Austin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 7:40 AM
This is SUPER, Daniel. I want to read more of your stuff. Congrats, Daver
Brown Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 5:36 PM
A thought provoking poem! Congrats on being featured this week!!!
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April 26, 2009 at 2:09 PM
Hi Daniel, congratulations on your featured poem my friend. I have also a featured poem this week. Ernilando
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