Special Day

Stood there at the altar,looking down the isle
waiting to see her smiling tear filled face
he knew she would be crying,cause she told him she wouldn't be
aw man..did she look beautiful...

As her father walked her down the isle
he smiled at her and kept on walking
tears filled his old weary eyes as he handed her away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 1:54 AM
excellent write, so emotional
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December 7, 2010 at 5:06 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Zach. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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December 5, 2010 at 6:40 PM
Beautiful poem.Enjoyed it.
Smith Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 2:19 PM
This is adorable, Zach. It's beautiful. Looking forward to reading more.... Love Dana
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