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Stood there at the altar,looking down the isle waiting to see her smiling tear filled face he knew she would be crying,cause she told him she wouldn't be aw man..did she look beautiful... As her father walked her down the isle he smiled at her and kept on walking tears filled his old weary eyes as he handed her away

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Date: 12/12/2010 1:54:00 AM
excellent write, so emotional
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:06:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Zach. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/5/2010 6:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem.Enjoyed it.
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Date: 12/4/2010 2:19:00 PM
This is adorable, Zach. It's beautiful. Looking forward to reading more.... Love Dana
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