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Special beach day with mum

Here is a poem request I wrote, for a lady who wanted a poem about a special beach day with her mum. Also posted on my Instagram account daisymeadows2023 Special beach day with mum Stunning, watching the sunrise, Above the beautiful blue ocean, So magical, watching the tide. The turtles nesting and guarding their eggs, And the wonderful turtles hatching, So protective!! Beautiful baby turtles, So amazing to see, Feeling the warmth of the sand, Between my toes, And the warmth of the sun, As my skin gently glows. Such a special day to spend with my mum, She means the world to me, Making a wonderful, happy memory, Sunrise, beach, ocean and turtles, A day with just mum and me. Mum walking by my side, It's a special place to be, Enjoying the sea air, Forever this memory will stay with me!!

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Date: 10/9/2024 12:13:00 PM
Wonderfully penned. I hope she enjoyed and can have more memories with her mom. So sweet of you to do for her.
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 10/13/2024 11:10:00 AM
Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/8/2024 6:42:00 PM
I know how much those memory can mean to a daughter I have a few of my own me and my mom near the water. Great write dear Daisy
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 10/9/2024 12:34:00 AM
That's lovely that you have some special memories with your mum. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a lovely day!
Date: 10/4/2024 9:19:00 AM
Dear Daisy! So heartwarming! I love how you capture those magical moments with your mom, especially the line "Such a special day to spend with my mum." It really shows the beauty of those cherished memories. The imagery of turtles and sun-soaked sand makes me feel like I'm right there with you. Keep writing these lovely pieces! - Autumn Blessings, Daniel
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 10/9/2024 12:33:00 AM
Thank you. Yes, I bet it would be amazing to see the turtles on the beach. This was a request for a lady who wanted a special poem written about a day with her mum. Thank you for your kind comments, much appreciated.
Date: 9/29/2024 6:16:00 PM
so delicious and moving poem, enjoyed very much the turtles on the sand thank you very much poet
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 10/2/2024 6:02:00 AM
Glad you liked the poem. Thank you for your comments and for reading my posts.
Date: 9/25/2024 6:53:00 AM
You set a lovely mood and scene with this warm and inviting poem, Daisy. Enjoyed! :)
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 9/27/2024 4:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments. Have a lovely weekend!
Date: 9/25/2024 6:41:00 AM
Special memories deserve a good poem. Very nice
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 9/27/2024 4:52:00 AM
Yes, it is important to hold on to special memories. Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 9/25/2024 4:29:00 AM
Oh Daisy, that is so touching, I can imagine the joy you feel walking on the warm sand with turtles hatching. Here in Australia we are a beach country but I've never see turtles. I know in the islands there are plenty. Hugs Maria
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 9/27/2024 4:50:00 AM
Hi Maria yes, it must be amazing to go to a beach with turtles. I love beach day's but have never been to a beach with turtles. I was asked to write this poem for a lady about a day spent with her mum. It is also on my Instagram account daisymeadows2023. I have written other poems requested by other people aswell. There are some I wrote about the diffent seasons aswell. Have a lovely day.
Date: 9/24/2024 12:07:00 PM
Sharing a wonderful memory at the beach...
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 9/27/2024 4:46:00 AM
Beach days are lovely. A good place for happy memories.

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