Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

Speaks To Nice Union

for much severe cold
                                     severe hot provides comfort
                                          hot relieves with cold

                                          hot burns hot quickly
                                      cold compresses cold likely
                                          speaks to nice union

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Kp Nunez May 16, 2015 at 7:52 AM Perfect senryu, BL. I've read your reply to Jan. Thank you for these posts. A person becomes what he feeds her mind. What's in his mind is communicated to his heart. I believe your poetry is good for a person's mind and heart. Kim :-) Bl Devnath May 16, 2015 at 9:21 AM Thanks for stopping by on my poem and for your credit. Always have sweet smiles. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 2:24 PM Oh I do like my heated wheat pillow when i have a cold ... then again I tend to keep it with me most of the year just to keep me snug and warm on the cold nights I'm not one for cold compresses:-) Hugs jan xx Bl Devnath May 14, 2015 at 9:39 AM When one angries upon another, if that another one keeps silence, everything becomes normal after sometime. Normally when they both keep silence, taste of life becomes fade. Keep your pillow heat always. Thanks for your comment my lovely friend. Loved always,bl