Sparrows

sharp chirping outside
sparrows hopping on the lawn
enjoying the day

Heidi Sands

8/15/17

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John Michaels

August 18, 2017 at 11:09 AM

Vivid imagery, Heidi. I can practically see the little fellows hopping around. Regards, John.

Heidi Sands

August 18, 2017 at 12:55 PM

Thank you John. They were cute to watch :)

Frank Sheehan

August 16, 2017 at 12:02 PM

Wonderful Haiku. Nice imagery. Enjoyed it immensely.

Heidi Sands

August 16, 2017 at 12:03 PM

Hi Frank. I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you :)

Russell Sivey

August 16, 2017 at 4:46 AM

This is a glorious write my friend! Sparrows are wonderful birds, such a delight to hear in the morning hours, like this one! I really loved reading your amazing poem this morning! You have written a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands

August 16, 2017 at 7:57 AM

They are cute birds Russell. Thank you for your uplifting comment this morning :)

Joseph May

August 15, 2017 at 6:51 PM

Wonderful haiku Heidi...best wishes

Heidi Sands

August 16, 2017 at 7:56 AM

Thank you Joseph :) Have a nice day !

Dean Wood

August 15, 2017 at 12:40 PM

Love the imagery! Have a great day!

Heidi Sands

August 15, 2017 at 12:48 PM

Thank you Dean ! :)

Vijay Pandit

August 15, 2017 at 12:18 PM

I see the images of chirping, hopping, enjoying the day. Well captured, Heidi!

Heidi Sands

August 15, 2017 at 12:28 PM

Thank you Vijay. They were really cute on the lawn and very happy :)

Tim Smith

August 15, 2017 at 11:50 AM

It makes for a wonderful day

Heidi Sands

August 15, 2017 at 11:55 AM

Yes, they are cute and cheerful, Tim :) Thanks for your visit .

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 15, 2017 at 11:14 AM

hello Heidi, I love the sparrows they are cute birds. I enjoy their chirping sound. It amazes me they last through the winter month. These are hardy birds. have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands

August 15, 2017 at 11:16 AM

Yes me too Darlene. There are so many kinds of sparrows too. Thank you for your visit to this and I also hope you have a nice day :)

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