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Sparrows

sharp chirping outside sparrows hopping on the lawn enjoying the day Heidi Sands 8/15/17

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John Michaels

Date: 8/18/2017 11:09:00 AM

Vivid imagery, Heidi. I can practically see the little fellows hopping around. Regards, John.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2017 12:55:00 PM

Thank you John. They were cute to watch :)

Frank Sheehan

Date: 8/16/2017 12:02:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku. Nice imagery. Enjoyed it immensely.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2017 12:03:00 PM

Hi Frank. I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/16/2017 4:46:00 AM

This is a glorious write my friend! Sparrows are wonderful birds, such a delight to hear in the morning hours, like this one! I really loved reading your amazing poem this morning! You have written a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2017 7:57:00 AM

They are cute birds Russell. Thank you for your uplifting comment this morning :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/15/2017 6:51:00 PM

Wonderful haiku Heidi...best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2017 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :) Have a nice day !

Dean Wood

Date: 8/15/2017 12:40:00 PM

Love the imagery! Have a great day!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 12:48:00 PM

Thank you Dean ! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/15/2017 12:18:00 PM

I see the images of chirping, hopping, enjoying the day. Well captured, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. They were really cute on the lawn and very happy :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/15/2017 11:50:00 AM

It makes for a wonderful day

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 11:55:00 AM

Yes, they are cute and cheerful, Tim :) Thanks for your visit .

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/15/2017 11:14:00 AM

hello Heidi, I love the sparrows they are cute birds. I enjoy their chirping sound. It amazes me they last through the winter month. These are hardy birds. have a nice day my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2017 11:16:00 AM

Yes me too Darlene. There are so many kinds of sparrows too. Thank you for your visit to this and I also hope you have a nice day :)